You wish,
The truth not be hidden,
From your naked eyes.
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Pasqueflowers and the child,
In full bloom,
Life is not wild.
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Dancing,
In this rain,
Children play in the street.
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Scream,
But, your voice fails,
Under fear.
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Condescending dreams,
The butterfly motion,
As he lies in white sheets of satin.
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The guitar,
He practices every night,
Has no strings.
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6 comments:
A couple made me smile..a lot :).
haiku! have tried many times but in vain. esp. luved the one on the guitar ..lovely
I've tried it many times too. Way too many rules to remember. I liked the one on guitar. I wish mine turned out like yours! :-(
@searchinformrmojorisin
:) :) :) :) :)
@Swathi
I had no clue what haiku was...read some very recently and lo! Mr.fatally flawed wanted to try it himself ;)
wud u care to post some of the ones you've written?
@Truth Fairy
I guess the above comment applies to you too...care to post some of the ones you've tried? :)
hmm interesting...
Yes... Attempted Haiku is pretty confusing - but nice trivia to know...
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