Somewhere Life Is A Figment of Imagination

Wednesday, June 22, 2005

Incomplete

Still sleeping in the wake of a cerulean dream,
All her world is yellow and cream,
The ghoulish nightmare makes a scream,
In the abyss of an endless seam


To Continue...

6 comments:

Child Woman said...

Dream to redeem :P

Child Woman said...

i think this poem was quite creative...better than the last one...

ur poem in sins was extrimistic...and this one's radically refreshing ...both hav paradox in common...

Child Woman said...

to continue....goes with incomplete...good thinking :)

Jake said...

my dear fellow(?)! a neat one. do continue. i stumbled on to your blog.

and oh yes, i liked you sins much better. provoking.
keep em coming.

Fatally Flawed said...

@ child woman
What do you think now? a paradox or parody? ;)

@jake
thanks for stumbling by my blog. :)

Child Woman said...

what do u xpect from me? a bit of both!