Somewhere Life Is A Figment of Imagination

Tuesday, September 06, 2005

Cold and Blue

The child looked on earnestly,
Into the eyes that were exuding void,
An abyss, into the ravine,
Her mother's eyes,

It had been several years,
Since the father had died,
Now the child had grown,
To a beautiful damsel,

Her innocence had not faded,
And her heart wrenched to see her mother,
Garbed in white,
All day and all night,

She was scared to ask her mother,
How, her father had died,
Lest she hurt her fragile feelings,
Knowing, so far, her mother had lied,

One day she saw her mother sitting near the door,
She had made up her mind to ask her the truth,
When she opened her mouth to speak, her jaw dropped,
To see her mother cold and blue

13 comments:

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Anonymous said...

Seriously. Get out and get some light. It's too dark.

Anonymous said...

@Suma:
Exactly my thoughts.

Fatally Flawed said...

@ anon

why the fuck do you spam dude?

@ ewe

yeah! I know...I'll come up wid something more cheerful...a lil' while later ;))

@ yet another anon ;)

Is this Preethi?

Child Woman said...

shivers!!!

Fatally Flawed said...

@ VP

:))

Priyavadan said...

nice one..

and you know the reason I like it, dont you? :)

zee said...

landed here from a comment you posted on my blog. loved this one. Dark and beautiful.

Anonymous said...

oops! am sorry...yes that was me.
i should cultivate the habit of leaving a signature. Gee.
but again why? why? why such a post?

~preethi.

Fatally Flawed said...

@ priyavadan

no boss...please enlighten me

@ venus

thanks for dropping by...and I'm glad you liked it

@ preethi

may I ask why not? ;)

Anonymous said...

yeah thanx. your counter question so very did answer my question. :|
and coming to answering your question, i can say maybe i dont like it when its sad...

PASHOK said...

I like it so much....Thanks for posting this and sharing...

Fatally Flawed said...

Thanks Poo :)